Recount Writing-My draft copy

I am learning to use the correct structure and language for Recount writing
This is the draft copy of my writing

Recount Writing-Going to town.

I am learning to use the correct structure and language
for recount writing.
This is the published copy of my writing

On the weekend I went with my dad
to the park to play basketball.  I felt happy.  

First I was shooting the ball in the hoop. 
I got lots of goals. I felt happy.  

Next we went to get lunch.  It was good.  

After that, we went back to
the basketball court.  

Finally,  we went to the park to play on the
swing and then I went to have dinner.  It was fun.
We had a little walk.

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